Alternate Dust Jackets (First Printing)

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Re: Alternate Dust Jackets

Postby WhatPayne » Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:03 pm

ThunderIce wrote:Wow, those covers are amazing!
I think I found a few typos though:
Volume 5:
"[...] that a rentless shower [...]" - Shouldn't it be relentless?
"[...]over Steelhooves. Wo knows [...]" - I think you mean "Who".
"[...]LIE BEHIND hIS [sic] IRON MASK?" - the "h" in "his" is lowercase

Apart from those few typos, these are perfect!

EDIT: I apologise; I had a previous version of these covers. Please ignore the first two.


That last one is in uppercase, it's just the H has "eroded" such way that it looks like h. :rainbowlaugh:
Well, I fixed it anyways. Just for you. :heart:
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Re: Alternate Dust Jackets

Postby ThunderIce » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:39 am

WhatPayne wrote:
ThunderIce wrote:Wow, those covers are amazing!
I think I found a few typos though:
Volume 5:
"[...] that a rentless shower [...]" - Shouldn't it be relentless?
"[...]over Steelhooves. Wo knows [...]" - I think you mean "Who".
"[...]LIE BEHIND hIS [sic] IRON MASK?" - the "h" in "his" is lowercase

Apart from those few typos, these are perfect!

EDIT: I apologise; I had a previous version of these covers. Please ignore the first two.


That last one is in uppercase, it's just the H has "eroded" such way that it looks like h. :rainbowlaugh:
Well, I fixed it anyways. Just for you. :heart:


Oh derp, silly me, I thought it was lowercase. Thanks for fixing it though!
I decided to go through the covers again (I made sure I had the correct versions this time... ) and I found a few other typos:

Volume 2:
Missing opening quotation mark in the KKat quote
"[...]each of her trait [..]" - I think you mean "traits"

Volume 3:
"[...]fool around nor misses twice [...]" - I'm not entirely sure, but I think it should be miss, not misses.

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Re: Alternate Dust Jackets

Postby WhatPayne » Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:22 am

ThunderIce wrote:Volume 2:
Missing opening quotation mark in the KKat quote
"[...]each of her trait [..]" - I think you mean "traits"

Volume 3:
"[...]fool around nor misses twice [...]" - I'm not entirely sure, but I think it should be miss, not misses.


I long debated with myself whether I should change the "Misses" to "Miss"... You see when I began this project I thought that I'll copy the text from the original source (the other cover projects) with the typos intact. Since the text isn't mine I thought I really shouldn't go around changing it, even if it means to fix typos or odd phrasing. But then after a while I figured "ehh, what the hell", I'm already fixing and modifying most other stuff here and there anyways, so I went and fixed the ones you mentioned there.

I hope "miss" is correct phrasing in that context (being non-native english speaker I have difficulties determining which sounds correct).
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